All Comments on 'One Of Those Days'

Pumps and pipes and hoses and non-English-speaking workers ad fucking nauseum. Who cares?

Unfinished, but I liked it.

A fun little read!!! Thanks!

Narrative was simple and straightforward. This author loves to write varied and detailed stories. Creative and technically sound. Good job.

Good one. 5

Re: Anonymous

"Pumps and pipes and hoses and non-English-speaking workers ad fucking nauseum. Who cares?" Hey, dumb ass, it was the setup as how his day was already going with the obvious arc to what he was going to find when he got home. The only part that wasn't a foregone conclusion was what he would do when he got there. The only thing I would have changed is they wouldn't have be taking two of my good towels with them. *****'s for being short and sweet.

Signed: BTW