All Comments on 'One-Percent Adaptable'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
uncultured

Eating yogurt with an expired pull date doesn't give you "food poisoning"! That's absurd, and not something a good writer would allow in a completed work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
From a (supposedly staid) Englishman

Abso-bloody-lutely brilliant!

fingers46fingers46almost 12 years ago
Good stuff

Nothing happened to me in Paris like this worse luck,very "nice" erotica,good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice beginning

But then two things happened: (1) The seduction was too fast and the acquiescence showed no reluctance; (2) the sex just didn't happen -- the story was over.

Too bad.

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