by Flashlight7.5
Eating yogurt with an expired pull date doesn't give you "food poisoning"! That's absurd, and not something a good writer would allow in a completed work.
Nothing happened to me in Paris like this worse luck,very "nice" erotica,good work.
But then two things happened: (1) The seduction was too fast and the acquiescence showed no reluctance; (2) the sex just didn't happen -- the story was over.
Too bad.