All Comments on 'One Sensual Night'

Very hot and descriptive. I felt like I was actually there witnessing their lovemaking. Very well written. Even though I knew what was going to happen the tension got me turned on right from the start.

Please get an editor or have someone proofread your work. What could have been an ok story was reduced to less than because of all the grammatical errors, which interrupted the flow. Keep writing. I'm sure your next story will be better.

It was still good despite the grammatical errors. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

I didn't see any grammatical errors and thought it was well written and very hot. No one is trying to be John Steinbeck here. The author is simply writing an erotic tale and did quite well IMO. Well done Slowhand335.

Really HOT!!

I would love it if you continued with more adventures of Nikki and Diedre.

I hope you continue the story. I'd like to know they become regular lovers and whether they allow Nikki's husband to watch or even play with them.