by andrewpeters
The human race are an abomination, the Universe would be a much better unknown if every single one of them where no more!
You lost me when the main character cheated with Gil's wife. He's more of a jerk than his wife.
Even though he was told Gil used a drug to 'make it easier' he still wasn't ready to forgive her. Not that it would have been easy, and would have taken the same work they had to do after he had sex with Nancy... but if you ended it there, it would have been better.
The obvious ending of them partying with Nancy, leading to another story, was just cheesy.
Last sentence ruined it for me. By coming clean almost immediately after, she gained the high ground. If drugs were involved that was exonerating.
I was surprised by my comment over 2 years ago.
Bill S.