All Comments on 'One Step Closer to Heaven Ch. 03'

I liked how the men became OK with the nudity in short order. Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!

I was getting worried that this story might have stalled forever! This latest posting continues the humiliation of George but I'm waiting for the games aluded to earlier to commence.

i can't wait for the next storie.

I don't know if you need any Chapter 4 ideas, but hope this helps if you do:

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The men were reluctant to get nude but now bask in the attention, regardless of who gives it.

The women in general are very enthusiastic, but Janey, the ring-leader, wants to slow things down, fearing lines will be crossed.

Mother Hanover continues her boldness and actively participates with all of the men.

Heather, who was grossed out by being matched with her dad, takes advantage of the situation using "tease and withhold" techniques to get better equipped for college next year.

I don't know if you need any Chapter 4 ideas, but hope this helps if you do:

Flipping:

The men were reluctant to get nude but now bask in the attention, regardless of who gives it.

The women in general are very enthusiastic, but Janey, the ring-leader, wants to slow things down, fearing lines will be crossed.

Mother Hanover continues her boldness and actively participates with all of the men.

Heather, who was grossed out by being matched with her dad, takes advantage of the situation using "tease and withhold" techniques to get better equipped for college next year.

I don't know if you need any Chapter 4 ideas, but hope this helps if you do:

Flipping:

The men were reluctant to get nude but now bask in the attention, regardless of who gives it.

The women in general are very enthusiastic, but Janey, the ring-leader, wants to slow things down, fearing lines will be crossed.

Mother Hanover continues her boldness and actively participates with all of the men.

Heather, who was grossed out by being matched with her dad, takes advantage of the situation using "tease and withhold" techniques to get better equipped for college next year.

I'm really enjoying the series so far. I like the reluctance of the men and the enjoyment of the women. I would not like to see the men become more comfortable. Rather, I would like to see the women continue to enjoy the nudity...then add to that the enjoyment of the men's continuing embarrassment. I think it should remain hands off for at least one more installment. The men should somehow lose some kind of a bet during the dinner preparations and have to all stand by the wall opposite where the windows are. This would put them in full perspective but, because of the light they can not see the faces of the women, who will verbally compare and contrast the different body and penis sizes.

This is already a CFNM classic. Keep up the good work and can hardly wait for the next part.

I appreciate what the last poster wrote, but the trend of this story is definitely in the direction of the men getting OK with nudity. The next step is to get sexual, where there does not need to be a comfort level ... "Getting naked with the family is one thing, but what you're suggesting is incest!" EWWW. :-)

At this point the writer needs to focus more on the action and not exposition (how the apartment is decorated and in-depth description of the panaramic view of the mountains majesty.)

Just don't keep us waiting, nosuchthing.

its great to see a story about female supremacy where a grown man must stand naked in front of his sister and be her servant at dinner. please write about more female supremacist families where the women are in charge and casually order the men about. its especially great when the men are reluctant and emberased.

It's great to read a cfnm or female supremacy story where the women are actully smiling and laughing.Too many femdom stories have a leather clad woman snarling.They never seem to be enjoying themselves. I find it hard to believe that,that would appeal to most women.It's wonderful to read about a normal american family where the women and the men dress normally[no leather or whips and chains ]and see the women take control and become in charge of the men and make them their naked houseboys.No violence,no pain no sadism.Just women laughing and enjoying themselves by having a little wicked fun with their men.Just think when you see women and girls on webshots, flickr ect having a male stripper party at home they are never angry. They are always laughing.They are also never dressed in leather but ussally just wearing jeans and a halter top and are ussally relaxing at home in their barefeet.

Just finished reading the story and so far I love it can't wait to see how it plays out and I really hope you continue it. I would really like to visit his building and maybe live there if possible :)

Screw your man hating story and the retarded horse it rode in on

No sex in any of them. Should have been in the exhibition/voyeur section.

Disappointing

Fucking stupidest shit i have read on here period.

"The day has barely began" ... and so the story finishes. I hate unfinished stories. Very bad