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Hamsteralmost 9 years agoWell Put Together Story
Nice story. Likable characters, believable scenarios. And nobody had gigantic body parts! This is what a sexy short story should be.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoDrat those pesky errors
Five star material weakened by shoddy grammar and spelling.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoNice concpt
Nice concept . sporadic in theme.. destroyed by grammer !!!
Countless errors ! At least read it twice ... and then an editor !!
Please !!!
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