All Comments on 'One Sunny Afternoon'

Good story! It was very clever and very well-written. It's not often I see "tackle" used to refer to a man's dick and I grinned at it. This was amusing, sexy, and creative. I hope to see more from you.

I liked this - nice ending, not too long, and well written

Nice little tale and easy to read. It was the sort of thing that could happen and easy to believe. It moved along quickly and happily with enough mystery to make it interesting.

I really get off on the 'watching and being watched' concept and you captured my interest. It wasn't exceptionally lurid but engrossing all the same.