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by Ian_Snow

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
“I think her and Lucy had some kind of freaky sexual twinness “

I think Lucy had some kind of freaky sexual twinness but I don’t think her had some kind of sexual twinness.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Liked the writing style

Enjoyed the jokes, but some editing needed to clear out the typos. (or autocorrect or auto suggest)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
very well written

Felt like I was transported to a bar and we were sitting there sharing a beer while you told the story.

Ravey19Ravey19about 3 years ago
Fun stuff

Really the essence of All Fools Day. And sort of romantic.

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 2 years ago

Funny and sexy...I loved this one.

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