All Comments on 'One Week with Mr. Hansen Ch. 01'

Well done, this is how a great story should start with the plot building slowly & intently. Nice relaxed description. A wonderful start to what will be a great series. Please PM me when you post your next chapter so I don't miss it

Cheers,

Menderman

That was really good. A three pager can often seem padded out but this was well constructed and written. Can't wait for the next chapter! Suz XXX

This is the kind of skillful writing and intensely erotic story her fans have come to expect from Lily Ann. One of the hottest things I've read lately. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I wish the the spanking episode had been more elaborate; but the depiction is still mighty hot, as the following excerpt evinces.

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>> He [Hansen] didn't say anything, but I [Claire] felt his hands on my stinging ass, rubbing the tender skin gently before he slid his fingers down between my legs. "Jesus Christ," he said. "You're soaking wet." His hands moved up to the waistband of my tiny thong and he pulled it down my legs, leaving it just around my knees as he pushed my legs apart and rubbed his fingers along my slit. I moaned softly as he rubbed me, and I could feel his hands shaking as he touched me. Tyson had left me so close to cumming before, and for some reason, having Mr. Hansen spank me like that had gotten me so hot that I couldn't contain myself. I wanted nothing more than to move off his lap and just start to fuck him. His fingers teased me as he moved them along my slit, collecting my juices . . .<<

a great start, i can't wait to read more and find out how it all ends.

OMG - this story had me hard from start to finish.

I loved it, and I'm so fucking horny right now.. I'm so wet that I couldn't help playing with myself, I swear.. my pussy never gets wet unless I'm fingering myself for 10 mins at least ;) you're amazing

Hot, hot, hot, hot, hot!!!

Mr. Hanson, are you trying to spend the night alone? If I may offer some advice here, Never argue with a woman you spank.

I delighted all parties are now behaving as they should, in my fantasy too.

I wasn't sure their fighting was going to help anyone

This story was entirely too creepy. Turning the page .

Goodness (yeh, I'm old!). So very hot. Has to have happened a lot, given the number of all of us, the chances of it happening, the number of generations of us and the NEED for it!

Good job, Lily Ann.

GRRRR. Oops, sorry. Forgot there's parts 2,3 and 4 out there waiting. Are you out there waiting, Lily?

Jack

Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck!

I LOVE eating my creampie outta her...

LOVE YOUR STORIES, ABOUT AS MUCH AS A HOT CREAMPIE!!!!

Claire's a bit of a twisted slut {which i mean in the nicest way}, isn't she?

Great POV and storytelling!

Can't wait for the next installment.