All Comments on 'One Weekend Stand Ch. 02'

You've found a brilliant balance. I love how detailed your descriptions are, yet I'm still able to fill in some of it in my own head. The way he woke up, seeing her next to him was a gorgeous beginning. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

OH SHIT! They didn't die in house fire or burn themselves with acid? That really spoilt the story for me. please make sure they die slow painful deaths in the next chapter, maybe a good stoneing? that happens in some places around the world why not your story?

After two chapters I don't really care in which direction you plan to take this story. It is sufficient simply to enjoy the characters and submerge myself in your prose.

Thank you