All Comments on 'One Woman's Fantasy'

by Master_Vassago

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Orgasmic!

This was so hot that I had to finger myself to orgasim several times... thanks for the cum material... I just wish I was Angelic.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
WTF?

Why were ther suddenly more guys? All of a sudden there was some Brian guy and more cocks than there should have been. Your a good writer just straigten out the details.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Yep

That was good, but I agree with the other person. It was'nt really clear why more people were added, kind of made it less real. Other then that though, it was good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot but GEEZ

You really need to learn to SPELL. THEIR, not there...on it's own VOLITION, not VIOLATION...all these errors are very distracting from a good story.

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