All Comments on 'Only a Matter of Time'

Amy, it is a great short story .... it let my imagination work its magic .... your words create the framework and my mind fills the gaps with erotic thoughts 😘

Still gave it a "5" because it is well written, has interesting characters and plot, some lightness of being, and definitely left me wanting more.

If I was writing it, I would have continued the story as part of this chapter. Interesting to see how the stopping short affects voting, comments, etc.

Nice story. Short but hot. With a promise of more to cum. 5*s

It's just beautiful... can't wait to read more from you, thank you!

He needs to fill her cunt with his seed. Soon he will give her a special present--a baby bump. Their new family will be a welcome happening

Hi Readers! Thank you ALL so much for the feedback! Just wanted to say that this is a “one-shot” story: there are no plans to continue it. I just wanted to see if I could write a sexy, interesting story using the absolute minimum word count (850) for Literotica, and I think this one clicks in at about 852. So, please, don’t seek out more of Christina’s story, at least, not anytime soon... but do please check out my multi-chapter ongoing story “Amy’s Vacation”, and keep an eye out for my longest story yet, “Betrothed”, (hopefully) cumming soon.... xoxoxo, amy

Only a matter of time before what, you will quit because you want to write romance novels?

Liked it gave it 4 stars thought it had a way to go, feel a bit mean now.

You have such a good story telling talent, baby girl!

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I found it very compelling. Got me erect myself. But like you in your story, wanting more. Can't wait until the next chapter.

Your wonderful words have brought back sweet memories of the years just before I left home for college. I’m not sure how tortured my father felt having to see both his daughters running around the house in different stages of undress. My older sister “The perfect one”, and myself, the “To tall” athletic daughter were always competing for his attention. Running around the in just a t-shirt and panties seems to do the trick. As my figure filled out, his comments gave me confidence. I became proud of how I looked and the attention it brought from boys. Eighteen years later and I’m laying on my bed nude with a toy inside of me. Wondering what my father would do if he walked in on my now. Fantasizing about watching him undress, spreading my legs as the bed I feel the weight of him climbing toward me. His mouth taking my breast as I whisper, “Daddy I need you!” As a Catholic, this fantasy is a sin, but I’m a women. As a women, I beginning to need the reality.

a delightful piece of erotica, just enough to keep one reading and just enough to make me want more... only a matter of time before you add another chapter in the same vain... 5/5

BareAmy83 is such a talented writer. Wow, what a beautiful story !

Taking the time. Always the best way to do things.

Always good to enjoy the journey a step at a time…..indeed you can be surprised by where the ultimate destination will be……patience…