All Comments on 'Only Consenting Adults Ch. 20'

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

No there will be no light.

Aiden and Rosa are screwed, no help.

joy_of_cookingjoy_of_cooking6 months ago

The pickpocketing doesn't quite hang together. They should have cancelled Davey's card as soon as it was found missing.

Other than that, excellent installment. Excited to see what happens next.

oneagainstoneagainst6 months agoAuthor

Dammit, called out. Yeah, plot device. Or was Davey too distracted with his stepmother?!?

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This story makes me feel like screaming’ “get to the effing point.”. I wish the author would cease with circuitous anal retentive bullshit and end this story. I have taken to only reading every second or third chapter and even then feel guilty for having wasted my time.

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