All Comments on 'Only One Bed, Again!'

Nice to get a story with Scottish connections for a change. I enjoyed reading it. Hopefully there will be more. 5!!

Thank you - perhaps a trope - but well done, nevertheless.

Good premise.

Good buildup.

But sex is too much talk and not enough down-and-dirty details of what was being done.

And the dialog was just unbelievable.

Four stars.

Disappointed they didn't end up being a couple

I'm happy to report this story reminded me more of seeing Billy Idol in concert than shagging my sister. LOL.

Would have liked for them to continue. A little closer in age also would have been nice.

All said though, very descriptive - very good.

I am pretty sure I would have fucked her too!!!! Great story!!!

Loved the sexy chest hair on Chris' manly chest!

Okay, so when I read:

"On the other hand, Scots insultswere epic."

My immediate thoughts were, "Aye, Lass! That they are!"

I gave you a 5/5 in spite of the fact that Chris and Cathy basically had a one night stand. I hated that they didn't feel a need for each other again as time rolled on. Very sad and disappointing. 😞

I gave you a 5/5, but I wish they would’ve stayed together. That part made me sad.

@ScottishTexan - They need each other, just not sexually at the point Cathy is narrating from. I felt my ending fit better with the realistic tone of the story.

Feel free to imagine what might happen at some point in the future when one of them needs significant comfort, if you like.

Good prose, even with the Scottish thrown in. Liked it.

Aww, lovely. The contrast between the dreich and the grime and the wet boots .. and the lovely hot shower and the bed! I relate to that. The sex was good too, I love that they kept up the Scottish insults - and the sibling endearments. Thank you, I love your writing.

I feel warm and cozy just reading this!

Please feel free to delete this, but I found an error.

"Lying right alongside each other, on the same mattress, faces alongside, feeling [eat] other's irresistible warmth..."

I hate that it ended completly. And I air fry there had been more dead for on the foreplay, but wonderfully written!

Sensational. Loved it. Loved the Scottish tone and the overall storytelling. It felt more like a tale of Scotland than a Literotica tale. The story felt key, the sex almost coincidental.

The ending felt sad, but that made it more realistic for me: nothing lasts forever. But it's good to have traveled to unexpected places along the way.

Thanks so much for sharing.

You are a wonderful storyteller.