All Comments on 'Oops! Ch. 04'

The Jaguar here. Well done. Is there more? Will they eventually get together for an orgy? Will it only be the girls with him? Will the male spouses of the other girls join in? Will Obama be President? Ok maybe you can't answer the last one but I hope there is more to come!

I knew the wife was the one to watch. Everyone is hard at it and she knows all along. Priceless!

Please keep it going there is still much fun that can be had, I hope to read more

Yak, just love group sex with consenting adults! This deserves your sequel with all joining into an orgy! Your language is getting hotter, therefore BETTER.

Betterwood on Lit

Very erotic, but you should have gone home with your sperm cells seeking an egg in Carly's tummy.

Great story, nothing disappointing here. Loved all the episodes.

It was funny and believable. It took some good storytelling to pull me through Pt. 2 with almost no sex in it, but you did it.

Oops 1,2,3&4 excellent reading hard all the way through please continue with more stories you must move closer I would

Probably need a dictionary to go with some of these: "a slab of beer" etc

Great though - want more

I enjoyed reading it every time. Thank you for writing.

Very well done... slow and tantalizing, with an awesome payoff at the end of each one. I hope this series isn't complete yet...

I enjoyed each chapter and gave five stars for each. I was hoping Danielle would get Her wish to participate in a gang bang somewhere along the way. Maybe you can let that happen in another story.

I Think that there should be another Chapter .. That way He can do the cops wife .. After All his Wife did the Cop .. You have to have payback

You wrote over nine years ago, without finishing it, so it would be a waste to comment. Be bad too, since it's a great story, but you needed a proofreader to fix a couple of grammar problems.

XYZ

what an idiot why write something you didn't finish

Such a great story -- too bad you couldn't finish it with some more chapters.

Good naughty family fantasy with 3 possibly 4 very horney sisters, (mom?), that are willing to share and one husband willing to share. 4 stars. No new chapters are needed they would be redundant less you were to include a orgy with the 3 sisters, mom, Dave, him. Danielle and Carly need to get togrther on BJ's

I loved this series. I would have enjoyed sequel story lines about this family. Been 12 years, so I am guessing you've moved on. Thanks for sharing.