by regularguy13
Make me really laugh - such a wonderful story - 5 stars👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌
Please contunue, i would like to see them all spend time not necessarily fucking each other but knowing and supporting their openess.
a good story with where all the parties finish up happy. The only slight fault is that it got a little bit confusing and slow in the middle but the ending sorted that out.
I got so turned off by the guy bending his dick, I stopped reading.
Total turnoff. b'uh-bye
It was little boring in the middle. It could have been more exciting.
Great story, with an ending we saw coming but all wanted. What happened to her sister in law, Zane’s aunt.
Thanks anyway
I enjoyed it, but the ending was a tad abrupt.
They saw each other.
They apologized.
They lived happily ever after.
The End.
I’m still laughing at the homophone’She road him.’
Guess she had a paving machine.
Otherwise it was a good, fun read. I’ll look for more from this author.
Bill S.
could have had a much better ending... every one at a big orgy party and son fucks mother whether known beforehand or not.
Didn't rate. Quit reading as soon as I figured where story going.
Good luck swingers
High STDs, divorce,etc
Retired CPA. Figures don't lie But liars figure!!?
As other authors who do reputable checks on unrealistic studies confirm.
Got a real kick out of this story with its great characters and a perfectly happy ending (no pun intended). I will never understand why somebody will read a fictional story and then complain that it doesn’t support the realistic facts of said situation. That’s why it’s fictional! Grow up or don’t read if you can’t understand this simple fact.
Sorry to be blunt but too many people whine about the lack of factual data in a fictional story when they should be telling the author what a great job they did crafting such a fun read.
A mostly enjoyable story. The ending was kind of lame but at least it was a happy ending. The story does need better proof reading. The line "she road him" is just the funniest of many errors throughout.