by PlayfulLittle1
A finely written story--nicely paced , well written. definitely arousing. Almost makes me bi-curious!
Totally believable with REAL characters who I liked straight away. Flowed along to it's sticky conclusion... obviously there is more to come..
This was incredible Little One... I cannot wait for the next installment... I felt the playfulness and love between these characters... and of course guy on guy... wow... total fantasy of mine!!! I want to be Shannon!!!
OH MY................GOD!!! I loved it!!! Well written, made me giggle, and made me moan too!!!!
My favorite type of work. Guys sucking cock with a woman.
Keep it up.
Im going to be a big fan!
Very nicely done. Accomplished narrative told a clear story (what went where, when, et cetera, which is no easy feat, is it?) bad illuminated the relationships and characters at the same time. Very well done indeed.
DOUGout