All Comments on 'Open-Minded'

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CindysBobCindysBobover 16 years ago
really liked it

interesting...wish for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hmmm, i think I like it

NOt much to have a wank over but it definately keeps your attention. Would be interesting to read it from her perspective...of course...she wouldn't consciously know what was happening...or would she? Whatever, lets see the next chapter.

cheesy80scheesy80sover 16 years ago
enjoyable writer

You have a knack to make the erotic absurd. That's a compliment. I laughed alot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Different and I like it

Your style of writing is different from normal erotic literature. It is erotic, sexy, and different (which makes it interesting). I like your style.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
mesmerizing

I imagine myself to be a very open woman. Your story Open-Minded is amazing. I just finished reading it... and... ahem... well lets just say my chair is incredibly wet. I am looking forward to reading many more of your stories.

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Grew up in Michigan, now live in Arizona. Engineer, writing on the side. "I will spend half an hour putting a seam onto a stocking and two minutes on a man's face. I know my priorities." -- Jack Vettriano, Studio Life If you enjoy my work, please leave feedback.