by archibael
NOt much to have a wank over but it definately keeps your attention. Would be interesting to read it from her perspective...of course...she wouldn't consciously know what was happening...or would she? Whatever, lets see the next chapter.
You have a knack to make the erotic absurd. That's a compliment. I laughed alot.
Your style of writing is different from normal erotic literature. It is erotic, sexy, and different (which makes it interesting). I like your style.
I imagine myself to be a very open woman. Your story Open-Minded is amazing. I just finished reading it... and... ahem... well lets just say my chair is incredibly wet. I am looking forward to reading many more of your stories.