All Comments on 'Open Wide!'

Lower than a one star

Sorry, but in any way I look at this story -and I’m a pretty open and kinky freak, this story just completely sucked. It’s not even good for humiliation. No, this was just abuse and nothing more.

Sorry. Try again.

Very sadistic but with no revelry added.

Pathetic. Disgusting. Disturbing. Revolting. Don't quit your day job. And, please, stop posting this stuff here. If you have to post it on Lit, at least post it under 'Fetish,' where people actually go to LOOK for garbage like this! It's just too bad that Lit doesn't allow us NEGATIVE numbers, for use in rating stories.

Need to have at least some level of respect for your own child... Disgusting and disturbing

Pure dogshit

After reading your nonsense and stupid story I want to repeat all the done things done to Jay in this story ten times more violently to you for wasting my time you motherfucker.

Plain abuse and cruelty