by Mesmeri
this was a really wonderful tale and quite erotic, I hope to see more.
I really loved Sara's character. So well detailed, how she thinks the worst of people no matter what, and ultimately gets mind-controlled when her own ethics slip. And geez, this story milks mind-control for all it's erotic glory.
I think that what everyone has said sums it up quite well. Keep at it.
As a massive fan of mind control this was right down my alley. I've been reading Mesmeri's stories for a while now and they always impress, arouse and inspire me. Andora's Box has to be one of my favourites, though, as it ends just as I'd have wanted it to! I'd love to take this and write a next episode, with a little chat with Mesmeri of course. But keep up the awesome work anyway, Mesmeri!