All Comments on 'Opening Ashleigh'

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HardBenHardBenabout 5 years ago
SIMPLY AWESOME

Really fantastic descriptive erotic writing. Just loved it...and of course the fantasies it evokes!!!!

POVscribePOVscribeabout 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks for reading!

Thanks, #hardben and others, for reading. Work has kept me busy but hopefully will finish more stories currently in draft soon. ;-)

18rabbit18rabbitabout 5 years ago
Love this one

Needs at least one more before she leaves for college. And Thanksgiving?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So hot!

You are honestly my favourite author! Thanks for loads of orgasms 😘

james1801james1801almost 2 years ago

Christ, you know how to write! Fantastic stuff, can't wait to read more. 👍

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good premise.

Disappointing story.

Everything sex related moves much to fast. And too automatically.

Do you really think "munching" on a cock is erotic? Not to me.

Three stars.

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