All Comments on 'Opening New Doors'

Because this didn't really go anywhere, just three pages of waffling and dithering; now you've that started the story, you're supposed to finish it.

Can't wait for part 2

Wonderful story, very well written, I loved it!

Yes Gina...a part two is needed!! I did enjoy the story!

Yes you should do a chapter 2

But I'm also very curious were you the wife or sister

This story definitely needs additional chapters.

I loved the way your story progressed and it is so damn refreshing to read a story involving real adults instead of someone who "just celebrated their 18th birthday".

Another chapter would be great!

Yes, I do believe a 2nd part is needed, please!!

I would love a part 2.

Please?

The progression, the attentiveness to detail and the characters played wonderfully. There were only a few misspellings, but one in particular was a treasure. "...and began fucking me with a furry." I know the word was supposed to be "fury," but after I read "fucking me with a furry," I just lost it. Too damn funny. Keep going!

I'll do another round. Not the most original situation but well written. I especially like the wife's awakening to her heretofore suppressed bi-sexuality. Jana's just too much for either of them to resist.

Definitely a secon chapter!😳

are you serious????? what part of you would we have to lick to get more? Reminds me of one of my birthdays that my wife gave me a few years back, but it didn't involve my sister But very HOT never the less. Awesome story and yes ,please more!

The girls need to delve into a sensual and loving relationship whilst both servicing him......perhaps......LOL

I've now read all three of your fabulous submissions and absolutely loved them all ... Again 11 out of 10 .... Please keep going ... I'll read anything you write , just love the easy way it all flows ....

Write more, but less "gawd"?

I'd like to see where you would take this, but can't really offer any suggestions.

Here's hoping you do continue.

There should definitely be another. Chapter.

But definitely another chapter

Defo more of your story loved it

I'd like to see more. I thought it was a clever set up, plenty of room to play with this story before its over!

whether you continue this story or not doesn't matter. As it stands you have written a great story. Most of the success is the tease, the lead in, the discussion of what is not there. A continuation would change from the mystery of the not quite known to a graphic and raunchy scene. Totally different.

I am happy with the way you left it.

Yes, definitely we want more of this . . . now Jana and her sister-in-law need to do each other all the way and then let her husband do them both. This is a very arousing and HOT story with so many possibilities. Lets continue.......... Thank you !!

More please...much more!

Yes you need to let us know what happens next with the sisters in law.... Great story!!!

Yes tell more,

This is a great lead into a highly charged finish and the ultimate taboo. Very erotic so far. Please continue.

This is more like it Gina - good story and well written and a wonderful climax, thank you. Let's have chapter 2 as soon as possible but don't skip the editing. ;)

More please!

Very erotic. I loved the build up. I certainly vote for part 2.

A great lead-in with a very erotic outcome. No hard physical or mental abuse, just a nice story. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Sorry, hate being anonymous but forgot to sign in before posting.

xsiveone

Great story, you really need to extend this another chapter or two!

Im glad he hasnt been cheating and hope there is none by anyone if theres a part two. Good story so far.

Yes please

Would definitely like to hear read the next installment a great read

Love to read part 2

Fantastic, really enjoying it...would love to read more.

Would like to read more.

Very good - tantalising - at least one more chapter required

Yes, please!

Yes Yes please for part two! Part one is really hot.

Please do chapter two. This first one was super hot!

SCOTTY

PREGNANT

Please, yes go onto the next chapter.

A great start to a fantastic story.

Fantastic start. More please!

Great story and well written. I would definitely like to read more.

Please continue.

Even though I have came multiple times earlier today, I had a stiff erection throughout the entire story. Please continue.

I inadvertently ran into the door while running around naked after reading your story. No permanent damage as my brain was already twisted. Lovely feast for the fantasies of my youth.

5 stars

(Oh, my dick is okay as it was shielded in my hand)

Need additional chapters for this one. Looking for Sister to et drilled and filled. :-)

Barepussluver

This great story certainly deserves at least one more chapter.

Very well done and nice slow roll out.

Oh my God!! Please don't stop now! There absolutely needs to be another chapter. So fucking hot!!!

Great story so far would love to read more.

Thank for writing another great story. Well written and believable. It feeds my bi fantasies.

Of course, I, too, would appreciate so much more! Good writing, enjoyable characters and Jana can teach them both so much more! Push their boundaries!

I loved this story! All I could think about while reading it was me being the husband and my wife and her younger sister acting out the female parts. Oh how I'd love to experience them doing the same or similar things for me! Well done.

Well done. Can't wait to hear the rest of the story!

Well done. Excellent story. Bit of a rambling lead up; but I can see why you did it.

We need a part 2.

There's should definitely be a part two..

This story ended up being so much more & ended up so different than I thought it would.

I figured it would be like other stories I've read. After the discovery of the cameras, I thought Jana would build up with Gail just to be able to bed her brother & that would be the end of it. Some writers hv that rush to get the excitement ramped up & then get to the explosion & then end it.

The heartfelt connection throughout the story & the sincerity @ the end took me completely by surprise.

You are an awesome writer.

Very well done.

Dear god you MUST cont With this deliciously done story!! I'm literally leaking myself in anticipation;)

Of course there should be a Part II, maybe even a Part III.

Well done Gina!

You should absolutely show us more of this erotic delight!

Got to continue this fantastic story is far from finished

Finish

"Opening New Doors:" - Forty-five Year Old Twenty-two Years Married, Richard and Gail, and Richard's Unmarried Thirty-three Year Old Rehab'd Sister. Jana.

The writer has a love-fest with the words she build her story with--it's awesome, it's soothing, sensual with an air of romance and love. I had a fabulous time feeling the writer massage her words as they're displayed from her carnal thoughts. I would appreciate a Chapter 02; I think Richard should impregnate his sister, Jana with several (more than a few) children. Gina, you have talents galore!!!

loved it

boring, where da fuck be da fucking?

This was a good story with unfulfilled potential...

Lucky birthday boy...

Every guy's fantasy...2 chicks to play with.