All Comments on 'Operation: Final Fantasy'

Soon he'll be calling her by her real name- MOMMY!

Waiting for the plot to level out............but a good read

What about the rest of the story? Phph

One of my coworkers told me I needed to name my 2003 Dodge Dakota quad cab when I bought it so I called it Duke. That's the only vehicle I ever named.

'Imitating Brianne' but well done and some interesting dialog. There are only so many plots and even Shakespeare borrowed. And if you were going to borrow, that sure is a great one to be borrowing from. Now lest see if you can bring this old man to tears as HLD did.

BTW, complements to the editor.

Can't wait for the next submissions!!

I like it; I love it; I want some more of it; to steal a phrase from a country western song. Thanks and hurry up with the rest of it. Please.

Great story and writing. I would like to read the further adventures - great read does not need much tweaking.

Thanks for the update. This site can really use new talent like you. Looking forward to the continuing story.

I think I have seen this story before. I will not spoil it for others. What I saw either had a sequel or had several pages. I look forward to a sequel from you.

Please tell me that you are writing the second chapter?!

Nice story