All Comments on 'Operation Minnow'

Very well written, with completely unexpected character development and depth. Thank you author, you done good...

You have got to add a second part. What about the baby??????

From an old Marine, FINEST KIND!

More very good story

Really well written! Loved the suspense and characters.

Very well done... I couldn't stop reading.

Love to see a sequel or an epilogue..

One of the better stories of read on here. Kept your interest and wasn't 8 pages of sex

Well done, a great mix of (what I can only assume) is a good inside knowledge of both the military and a woman.

Well written, grammatically correct, and just the right amount of intrigue, suspense, and sexual interaction. Hope to see additional chapters!

What a captivating story. As the previous from Anon said, well written and correct grammar except for conjugating the verb to sink. Should be sink, sank and sunk.

So I am a bit confuse.Was she really the colonel? Was this a setup? Also did she become a comfort women at the end, because of what Deacon said?

I really really hope there's a sequel to this. God it was so fucking hot.

Thanks for writing an imaginative and well written story!

A good story but a little bit too dramatic. "I sprinted 50km with multiple weapons, tools, supplies and carrying another person. Near froze in the water several times, almost drowning once. Soldiers are hot on my arse but I keep telling her - okay..... okay.... okay. When I get to the afterlife I'm gonna tell them I got riddled with bullets whilst being balls deep in their innocent virgin daughter. "

Yeh nah that's all a bit much for me

I've had a 180° about this story. Rambo steals himself a virgin living sex doll from an ultra conservative background whom he has zero connection with to rape on his way out of enemy territory. This story is perfectly suited to literotica because he obviously rates sex above his mission/life. ....well played.... literotica is all about stroking the male ego 🙂

The ending left a lot to be desired. 4*

Very well written and edited.

Compelling story & satisfying to read, but not what I was looking for in Literotica.

Bill

A very well crafted story. Also well edited, which is a rare joy.

Good plot. Sex was over the top - anal was unnecessary.

Wish there was a higher ranking than 5.

It's rare to find a story on Literotica with such good pacing and p!ot. Very well researched with likeable characters that added to the tension of their perilous situation. Agree with the earlier comment about the unnecessary anal sex and I would add the final roadside blowjob to that list. This is where a good editor would have made a difference, along with sharpening up the ending. Could understand what you were trying to do, but the execution wasn't quite right. Still a 5 star story. Thank you for the engrossing and enjoyable read.

Absolutely gripping! Outstanding work.

Wow, what a story! Amazingly written…brink Skipper back soon!!

A good story, maybe a little farfetched but ideal for literotica, A little confused by the ending, hoarding was she a colonel at 18, what was her value to the Americans and why was there no outcome between them. Still an easy 5⛤