All Comments on 'Opportunity Knocks'

by Ann Douglas

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Write a sequel please.

This is an excellent storyiwant to read what happens in the shower hoping they have a good climax together.I hope you allow jocelyn to shave jayne while their in the shower and wash each other i love doing that to my wife.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 6 years ago
again

you have wrote a great story, I am also glad it was only 3 pages long, keep up the great writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Another Enjoyable Read

Love your stories. I am always happy when I see your name against the latest postings.

AnyMooseAnyMooseover 6 years ago
More Jayne!

It doesn't appear you do series or sequels but Jayne, with (hopefully) Jocelyn or without, deserves more stories please.

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Meover 6 years ago
Another good one A.D.

Very enjoyable. Sexy.

TSreaderTSreaderover 6 years ago
Oh my!

A very yummy story! This definitely deserves more to it... Thank you for sharing this with us 😘

LaineyTalesLaineyTalesover 6 years ago
Fabulous Story

Never look the other way when the opportunity knocks. Wonderfully written, wonderfully told, tale of seduction and all at the bosses expense.

E xx

amritaloveramritaloverover 6 years ago
Bravo

You again show why you are my favorite author here. A great mix of setting, character and sexy action. First time lesbian in a professional setting with an escort - a triple score.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I'm Dripping

Oh my dear Ann, how I would like to be your Jayne. Kisses.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Soaking wet here

Oh my! What a beautiful and tender love story. I was transported to Jayne's to and I felt every touch from Jocelyn. My orgasm came, just as if I was there. I'd love to see them reunite after Jayne returns to New York.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 6 years ago
Yet another good story!

I totally loved this one, thank you for sharing it with us!

kathy2012kathy2012over 2 years ago

Hot story! Time to jump in the shower for some good clean fun!

All the best,

Kathy

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More lesbianism inspired by bad dudes what a bore.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The sex was good but the story was bland.

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I'm an average wife and mother, well, maybe not so average, who likes to write Erotica. I'm not a professional writer. In fact, until I tried writing my first story in the early 90s, I hadn't written anything longer than a letter since high school 20 years before. I like ...