All Comments on 'Opposite Worlds Ch. 01'

by fgmntfmgnshn

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
texstertexster2 months ago
Had ‘em in the first half…

I was prepared to comment on this opening chapter, but that last sentence was…<chef’s kiss> magnifigue…only way it could have been better is if it were a slightly snarkier remark, but still, full marks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great start

I loved this. I guess that I was a nerd too at that age and younger. I wasn't as smart because I could not have elaborated why I just didn't want sex at the beginning. I just felt that way about it when with my first loves. I was a tough guy actually in highschool, more like in the movie "Outsiders" or "Grease'. Yet, I put women on a pedestal in the early sixties. Amazing... Reading most of these stories I thought I was a wimp or something back then. Great read so far for me.

cantbuymycantbuymyalmost 12 years ago
waiting for number 2

and i dont mean shit. good story - want to read more. 5

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous