All Comments on 'Opposites Attract Ch. 01'

I'm liking the potential of this story. I really do think you need the longer chapters though....you just start to get into the story and all of a sudden it is finished. Cheers.

I am really excited about this story. Can't wait for more. Longer chapters would be better I think, I could handle the longer wait.

Well written, longer chapters would be great.

Longer chapters would be nice. I agree. The wait would be worth it.

I love this story and can't wait for more. I would want longer stories once or twice a week. With you its worth the wait. I also hope to see more about mike and tony in the future.

loved it.....longer chapters would be great and well worth the wait...

worth the wait

I liked it a lot!!! and have to agree longer chapters would be great

great start..longer chapters.

I haven't come across a story that truly grabbed me in months. I was pulled in immediately after reading the first paragraph. I love the characters, storyline and absolutely love your writing style. I cannot wait till the next part. Thank you so much :))))))

Okay well its pretty much unanimous. Longer chapters further apart. So I will be posting some time next week.

Also, If anyone was curious I based Noahs appearance (In human form) on Nowe from Drakengard 2. If you wanted to, you could go to google images and look up a picture xP. I know that some people (myself included) Like to just skip over descriptions and make the characters how they want them to look in their minds, but not everyone :).

This will probably be the story that I add to next week.

I loved this story I can't wait for more, and yes you should totally have longer chapters

"P.S. There will be more of this story and more of Things Change but I will be bouncing back and forth between those depending on which ones I get better reactions from."

I have already Things Change. Liked it. Keep coming back to see if there a new post. I see this and think why not read, liked TC. This little PS at the stop me right there. Should have let off the "depending on...". This says to me at least 1 of these will not be finished. Big turn off. Hate getting in to a story and it just stops. I understand it happens, life happens but that there says choice of it happing. Sorry I will not be back. Good luck.

i'm a very big reader and you're very good. practice and experience will round it out. i don't consider myself an expert, but i read alot alot. i would sugest reading some of the popular romance authors, such as christine feehan, angela knight, and gena showalter. at the very least you can get some ideas. :) whatever you do, don't stop! love it. write more. please. :)

Great start- intrigued.

It is unusual for a vampire and a Lycan to become allies but I am glad. Noah was obviously different to the rest of the pack and he has honor no matter what, which is a nice characteristic I noticed in Matt too, even though he is a vampire. It is like he is not like the rest of his clan, which I can see may cause problems as it looks like Nira is on a vendetta more than a hunt

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