by leejames
I liked the story alot. I think the princess should go visit Daddy though.
very nice tale, would like to see more like it, perhaps a little family reunion?
I haven't enjoyed a tale this much in a long while. Please, please keep writing them! Amazing!
I have really enjoyed reading this story. Perhaps it doesnt have to be the end? I would really love to see how she deals with being a dragon...and him teaching her all there is to know. Please continue with this story!
What a beautiful story. I'm such a sucker for happy endings! Thank you so much for sharing this.
. . . which probably shouldn't be a compliment on this forum, but it is. Well done -- well, done indeed!
that was a really great story. There were so many great aspects. I love that he had watched her throughout her life. It was sweet that her mom saved her. Cute that she is a water dragon which is where they met. I didn't quite get why he was completely opposite personalities in each form and I like that he melded them a bit in the end.
I want to know what the heck those letters are at the beginning of the title!
I agree that you should write more of their story. It is sad that she won't get to know her brother. Maybe she can follow him a bit and know him later. Maybe her and Jareth and kill the king together! :)
they are great characters and deserve a little more story
Fantastic read. I loved the slow burn and climax. Need to see more of these two as they adjust to being a mated pair, and visiting her family(hint hint)
I loved this story very much. More chapters would be very much appreciated.
Very much enjoyed this story, especially the big teasing lead up. I would have liked to see a bit more exposition done on the immediate threat of her family, but in the grand scheme of things the story telling works very well. I look forward to more!
Thank you everyone for your comments on my story, I really appreciate your feedback!! Please check out my other submissions to see Part II of the Jareth and Layra story, and be looking for Part III coming soon. Thanks!
I usually don't read the non-human genre. Looks like I've been missing some very good work.
Loved this story and will read part 2 at once.
I picture the dragon as the one in the movie "Dragon Heart". It's voice was done by Sean Connery. Don't know if this was you inspiration but it sure brought the characters to life for me.
I will have to look at some more of your stories. Very good work. Thanks.
Woodmanone
He turned a princess into a scullery maid for his amusement. Jerk. How is this sexy?