by Snekguy
That was a great read. Boyd was really unlikable at the start but turned out ok. Thanks for sharing your story
Outstanding! I read this fine tale of yours years ago, and this re-write was a pleasure. Semper Fi
A good read, enjoyed the story, the idea of sex with a female polar bear not my thing, didn't even rate a twitch, thou well done for stretching the sex out as much as you do. Always a little surprised when alien species have the same sex organs as humans.
Enjoyed the action. Find it strange that the navel forces wouldn't have shoulder fired rockets as they know the PDF have armoured vehicles. Worth 5.
Read the original long ago. I like this one even more, Well done Snek. One problem, Navy Captains never talk direct to ground troops, in combat. Semper Fi.
Missed this story previously, so this was a first time read for me. Though I like long stories, this one didn't do it for me. I gave up on page 20, in sight of the refinery, because the walk across the ice and snow was taking too long. Three stars for what I did read.
A Really Good Story Made Better !
I liked it the first time around , but you made it even more enjoyable !
Thanks for the read , 5*'s as usual
txcracker
Another sweet long action adventure with another happy ending! You restore my faith in romance and love. Thank you.