All Comments on 'Oral Expressions'

Better if it was a little longer and there was another sister....winks

got me nice and juicy.

Helen

helenwill@yahoo.com

It really doesn't get too emotional or too original but that's not necessarily a bad thing. It's light and quick to the point but still very hot!

There is touch of humor here and the author creates at least somewhat credible people - not just sex machines.

VERY NICE, IT SHOWED CARING. AS ONE PERSON SAID IT COULD BE LONGER. NICE STORY.

THANKS JERRY

dickey or double D's or shithole play to make it a very enjoyable tale.

your stories are really good but you cut them off when you can easily make sequals to your stories

this cries for a second chapter to tell how they continue and if they go all the way. do they fuck, is she a virgin, is he a virgin, do the parents find out, is she in college, is he in high school or college, do they move in together these are questions we need to know more about so please finish the story.

once again we only get the middle third of the story. wheres the background and character development? wheres the end? either delete the story or finish it but don't leave it like this.

Omg, I can never get enough of this type of story. Thanks for the read.

Love brother & sister taboo....

This story was hurried & so I rated a 3 stars. I though that there should have been a little more apptehension in knowing they were siblings.

Otherwise...a sexy read.