All Comments on 'Oral Intercourse'

Much much more I hope.

What a nice and direct way of getting now each other. I really like these characters an I hope I can read all their fantasies coming true. And I assume you're as honest as they are in real life, AlinaX.

You opened alot of doors to other stories. hope you build on this story line and make them a longer read.

I'm not deliberately writing short stories - I'm learning a lot of respect for other authors on this site!

Thanks for commenting... :-)

Liked your premise and getting up front the sexual desires they have. No doubt that the female protagonist is the dominate one of the pair. Can see it as the set up for a series. Liked it.

It is very much the setup for a series, but not labelled as such. Take a look at my profile page for the complete tale of Ali X-...

I really like the 10-card negotiation system you described. Very clever and good for identifying the participants' actual desires while they are blind to the other party's desire so they're at least theoretically somewhat hampered if they felt the urge to modify their stated desires to fit their partner's.

Can't believe I have only just found your stories after over 20 years of occasionally reading Literotica!

Love the set up, really great ideas. Am off to find the rest of the Ali series now....

-streetlamp-

Nice to be found. I hope you continue to enjoy. :-)

Hot!

Loved it, love her...!

Easy 5 and fave and follow...

-and realised about kissing my sweetie a long time ago...what's good for the goose...

-and would also have a really hard if not impossible time with her last...9 out of 10 is passing everywhere

-and while never asked have wondered about it if there was a quid pro quo for rogering my sweetie's rump...men do have a prostate ...had a gf back in college that would/could '..come like a machine gun...' when we were playing in her back door

-a little surprised no question about period sex.. most of past gf's already high libido goes off the charts when Aunt Flo comes to town ...no way we're willing to stop...a thick dark terrycloth towel, warm wet wash towel/ fresh tampon at hand, and it's always mish...no cowgirl... they've been delighted when I suggested...one Jewish gf giggled, said her past bf's would have freaked at the suggestion

Thanks for all that. :-)