by Drmaxc
A nicely balanced story with a good range of emotions and some interesting suspense. Worth a lot more than the score which it presently has. Would really enjoy a follow up tale.
Oh what a schoolboys dream, loved it.
I do hope you write more about this.
Still just the one orange Max?. Still, not the only fruit, I do enjoy a nice banana but not when it is all soft, no when it is firm and still slightly green. Then of course there is always a nice pear ( pair) but again not too big or ripe and just a little firm on the top. Wonderful, my shopping list for this week.