All Comments on 'Orchard Street'

by NathanRavenwood

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Outstandins

I really loved this but would like to see a continuation series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
masterpiece of a story.

My life is quite like Vincent, but of Dante in my world. ☹

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good story I like it a lot

I need a young man like that next door to me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Excellent writing

Love that you gave us a fully rounded story and hot sex.

NathanRavenwoodNathanRavenwoodover 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks for reading everyone!

Hi there! Yes you, at the computer and/or on the phone! Thanks so much for reading Orchard Street. If you like this story and want to read more, check out my first book The Cordax Mondotta, available on Amazon from Uruk Press here! https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0751CDZ1Y

And if you like that one, you can pre-order the sequel The Starlight Engine here! It's due out January 1st! https://www.amazon.com/Starlight-Engine-Adventures-Avery-Avedaan-ebook/dp/B0777M2S8X/ref=la_B0759Y82BN_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1510938957&sr=1-3

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
good

well written. convincing. hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Elaine could be my wife

My wife is a lot like Elaine (apart from the religious aspect), she has lost all appreciation for my toned body and big cock... if only I had a nice young man like Dante nearby to fuck and suck me off. I toy with the idea of leaving her when my youngest finishes high school. Initially I thought I’d fuck around with younger women but more and more I find myself thinking of bypassing women altogether and just going for a guy. In my (limited) experience sex with another guy is so much hotter than with a woman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
loved the story

Truly loved the story. Find myself wanting to meet a guy like Dante everyday!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

For those of you that have not yet had the wonderful experience of m2m sex, I highly recommend you try it. I was 44 when I had my first m2m sex and was pissed that I had not found out earlier in life how great it is. Actually, it is so much better than sex with a woman.

mrsreadermrsreaderalmost 6 years ago
great story

A moment in life that a lot of man will recognise. Whether they take that step or not.

Very well written down in a believable scenario.

Thanks Nathan

DeborahAnneDeborahAnneover 5 years ago
Very nice hope for more

I was started into the m2m world by my step dad, thankfully he started off slowly with mutual masturbation, then he sucked me which was ok, but he did not let me cum into his mouth. After he did me he wondered if I would like to suck him, what he did not know was I had been sucking my own cock, at least the head and swallowing my cum which I liked. Anyway I told him yes and had him sit cross ways on my single bed with his back against the wall and me between his legs, when he got close he tried to pull back but could not he came into my mouth and I took it all, and loved it. The next part started one evening when my mother was at work and my sister was at a sleep over. He came into my room with just his shorts on and a couple towels he let me suck him and when I finished he asked if I would like to fuck him, I had no clue but he used vaseline as a lube and coated my cock which felt really nice, then he lubed his ass and guided my cock into his ass. That felt so very good, it took just a few minutes for me to cum. He cleaned me off, wiped himself then asked if he could fuck me. I agreed and he was very gentle and lubed us both, then put his cock head on my hole and pushed, there was a little pain and I told him so, he stopped with the head inside and waited, when it felt good I told him and he pushed in more, stopped and waited for me to accept him, when he finally got in all the way he held it for a bit then started slowly to fuck, after awhile I told him faster, then harder, when he came inside of me I felt it and I also ejaculated on the sheet I was laying on. Wonderful feeling wish I could find a man to fuck me again, its been too long. da.cd@frontier.com

Reggie2xxReggie2xxover 5 years ago
I want a neighbor like that

There still love in my marriage but not sex I have turn to men for relief and pleasure. Would like someone to fill the void and Vinnie would be great.

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