All Comments on 'Order of the Shattered Cross: Pt. 02'

Very interesting!

5

Damn but this story get better with every chapter. You've got a gift for storytelling, very strong imagery and word choice as well as strong character and world building.

I'm hooked. 5*

You need to submit this to one of the major science fiction/fantasy publishing houses when you finish. It is as good as the Dresden Files.

I can understand having things that get in the way of writing, but hope we don't have a long wait before the next chapter. Thanks for a great story.

Loving the story.

Thank you for sharing this excellent story with us. 5*

Feels like it’s building up to something big. Looking forward to more.

I agree that you should publish one, but with two different forms. One with the sex

and without. I think this would appeal greatly to Dresden fans and immortal bones fans.

So very glad i found your storys and hope for many more!

Fascinating storyline that needs an ending

Absolutely loving this. These type of stories are top of my list! Well done!

Another reader here that’s really enjoying this, I really hope you have the story arc with an ending planned and are just writing towards that, it’d be very sad if this were left to wither away unfinished.

Really appreciate you writing and posting this here on Lit, even though other things fight for your time, best wishes, Ppfzz. 5⭐️