All Comments on 'Order of the Shattered Cross: Pt. 04'

Glad to see another chapter!

5

Inject it straight into my veins. Finally another fix.

In Home Sweet Home it was established that Riley Blake's Father Timothy novels had attracted an unexpectedly large fanbase of teen readers. Not really seeing anything so far that would seem attractive to teens?

Nice story. History, aternative history. Stilldo not get him as a person. More please. Hurry!

Small edit: survives not serves firstcontact.

Thanks

Riveting story. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Great story. Just tht I read again part 3 to recall it.

I am saving it for a second read once finished.

Keep working on the personage of tha Sister Frost it s going to be the keystone of the story.

The creator gave us free will, and provides us guidance, but we have the choice to accept that guidance, or ignore it. Military adage, no plan services first contact."

As said by another: "No plan survives first contact."

This is a GREAT Story. A few typos, wrong words here and there.. But great.

Eagerly waiting for more!

what a story, riveting