All Comments on 'Order of the Shattered Cross: Pt. 07'

Hardcore!

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Cool, you defintely need to ensure you finish this :)

I wait so long for installments, then realize, a true art takes time.

Bernini didn't hammer a marble masterpiece in a day, but a year.

As always, superb.

Ok. Maybe I’m reading this wrong but I had always assumed that Timothy and Sister Frost were working for the Catholic Church. If that is correct then you wrote the Our Father wrong. Only Protestants say “For thine is the kingdom, the power and the glory, for ever and ever” as a part of the Our Father. Catholics say “ For the kingdom, the power and the glory are yours now and for ever” but we don’t say it immediately after the Our Father. That comes a little bit later after the priest says a prayer called the embolism. I know this may seem like I’m nitpicking but it’s a true pet peeve of some Catholics when our prayers are substituted for another church community’s prayer.

That being said your story is AWESOME and I’m enjoying it very much. I just got twitchy when I read a Catholic praying in a way that she never would. Ok. Rant over. Please continue with your wonderful writing. You are much appreciated!!!!!!!

A great chapter in this series. Thank you. Is it possible for the chapters to be published a wee bit faster? ;p

so short and so loong I wil re-read all together , the final is arriving! Good story

So eager for more!

I've said it before and I'll say it again. I'm so, so, very glad I stumbled across your writing! It's always a pleasure and I anxious await your next installments.

This work combined with its parent story are really really good. Great characters with consistent and different voices, exciting and unpredictable plot. Gritty and real. Good stuff

Wow! Great job! I'd lost track of this series and just stumbled back on it. I still think it is one of the best I've read on this site. From not on, I'm following you so I don't miss another installment. I'm going to read chapter 8 right now!