All Comments on 'Ordering Take Out'

For some reason, the site isn't letting me rate your story right now, but know that I give you five stars! This is a great story. I love the unique plot and the well-written characters. The use of fortune cookie fortunes was ingenious! I can't remember the last time I read a story using fortune cookies. I've always enjoyed stories about partners or close friends discovering a new side to their relationship.

Although there was no sex or even kissing, the story was cute and sweet and the banter was amusing. So to sum up, your story deserves a lot more recognition and reviews. Keep up the good work!