All Comments on 'Orgasmic Ride'

Loved it!! Is there going to be more?

Hope so, it was perfectly readable, great speeling.

on the speeling in the story.

It makes everything else just fade away.

lol

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Loved it was amazing this is something i wish was read id ask my step sister to ride with me wow continue on with part 2 please it was an amazing and sexy short story would love for a part 2

Great story and easy to read.

Oh what the hell 5 stars.

I gave it a 5 . . so refreshing to have a new idea of bringing the lovers together many thanks

@rightbank Don't comment on someone's spelling when you can't spell the word itself correctly.

Where "spelling" was incorrectly spelled "speeling" - @rightbank was being funny

where's the beginning? where's the background and character development? where's the end? all you gave us is a rushed middle, do all serious readers a favor and delete this chapter and post a COMPLETE STORY OR NOTHING AT ALL.

Why be so mean? Just don't read it, or post nicely that you were disappointed. Some of us "serious readers" enjoyed the quick, guilty pleasure.

Now that's a ride that I want to go on. I am sure that the line would take hours to be able to ride!

You gotta write a continuation for this. It was so hot!

This story featured everything I LOVE. Very nice!!! <3

Kudos! That was a great short story, imaginative and very hot! I hope you write a follow-up to this with Adriana and Ian.

The story was great, the only criticism is that the author didn't write a second chapter. 5 stars

Read years ago & really got me off. Been looking for it to read again, finally found it & boy was it worth it