All Comments on 'Origin: Prologue Ch. 02'

this is cool i liked it.

More coming within the next month, please leave comments if you read my work. I'd love to hear what people are thinking.

are you ever going to continue this story?

I read the original story and thought it was great, I also read your comments. Are you going to finish this? I'm a horrible at writing with a bland imagination or else id do it.

For a good re-write of a story that had a great opening premise. I hope you'll finish this.