All Comments on 'Orion Origins'

Intriguing start to a slightly offbeat tale. Perhaps you could let us know when you are likely to continue it.

Somewhat quirky story that has got my interest. You left it at a pivotal point and could develop the story as a romance, as a thriller, as a non-con story, etc. Jason could be a good guy; a bad guy; a dullard; anything. A follow up would be appreciated.

FTDS and title this as part 1!

There's 2 parts to this story, and a sequel as well. I got over my spat with literotica (they didn't seem to like my style of writing, so I ignored them for quite a while). We'll see if I can get part 2 past their gatekeepers.

"Jason could be a good guy; a bad guy; a dullard; anything."

I report. You decide. I think you'll find the next episode very interesting.

As mentioned before, this requires a continuation.

Clothes may make a man or woman or not!

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Definitely deserves more.

Just remember: if knowledge is power, librarians are the secret masters of the universe!

Well done homage to the pulpers! You have capture the style beautifully down to the final hook! 5 stars.

Well guys, I don't know what to say. I submitted the sequel 22 days ago, and on September 2, it was rejected because it had links in the story (to images of the comic books I reference in the story). I removed the links and resubmitted, and it's now been 2 weeks with the story in "pending" status.

According to their policies, asking about the status will only push the story further back in the queue. I'm not paying for their publishing of my work, so it's not up to me to tell them how to run their website. I just provide some of their content for free, so I'm not actually a customer.

I just wanted to explain the long wait for a sequel that some of you have asked for and that I've already written.