by NotWise
I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I'm always happy to get feedback.
Very very nice. Your character descriptions make you really see them. Thanks!
You've created a gem here. I was completely willing to suspend my belief to fall into the ghost world of Oscar, Trish, and Tommy. Your ending was the cherry on top.
I really enjoyed the story. The characters were very well drawn, with light brushstrokes, and the story flowed well. I liked the way Nick and Emil were the agents of the story's climax. A story very well spun!
Poignant, strange, curious - resonated because the characters were well written - their dialogue, behavior, attitudes. Easy to get drawn into what was happening. Glad that Oscar, Trish, and Tommy were finally laid to rest. But am a little curious as to what happened to their spirits. Of course, Nick and Emily couldn't remain to see what finally happened - but hope the spirits can finally RIP.
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