All Comments on 'O'Scouries Valentines Day Wife'

Ok a few things,

1) the father is Mr. X the rapist.

2)the story is well written and feels original, probably not, but it feels that way.

3)the writing is fresh and easy, not pedantic and plodding like many authors on this site

4)it needs a part 2, in a way its a love story/romance/train wreck

Thank you for writing and sharing it with us

so needs a part 2

Loved the story and the progression to the divorce. I realize a lot of stories on the site leave the ending up to the reader but wish the author had shown his view of how these lives progressed. On the other hand, he might have been crucified by the 'loving wives' trolls from both sides. I'll be writing my conclusion in my imagination today and tomorrow!

mr. X needed to be ended very very slowly and very very painfully.

the rest of the story was just plain stupid - 88 different lovers - what about STD's and when is she going to die a horrid death?

Which is why I gave it a big fat ZERO for the violence against women by mr. x.

But 1 star to lower your average score.

Was good until he fucked the slut at the end. Still gave it 3 stars but I was disappointed by it.

This was fun; thanks.

Darn good, I hate rape though. Pretty sure Mr. X is her Dad.

Ughhh. Incomplete AND how can he still love her?

CUCKADOODLEDOO

I know this one has been around for a while, but… well I’ve read it three times, and it breaks my fucking heart every time. I judge a story based on how well it’s written, if it fits within the logical parameters/ behaviors etc. of the story construct, and how well it elicits the targeted emotions. Brilliant story brother.

5-star story! Very well written!

It was really good until the end.

The story was OK. The M/C's ( cheating one) don't have to be burned, or CUCKED or whatever. The story lacks even a passable WHY.... Also the husband character's behavior just doesn't sell the audience that would not care for some retribution.

I liked it but didn't love it. In the end there was no feeling of the intense betrayal and disrespect.

And of course the standard "I'll always love you". Never respected you and betrayed the hell out of you, but none the less ...

Actually I went from 4 stars down to 2. You write well, but the ending sucked. She cheated on him for their entire relationship, had children with other men and he's so shallow that he just jumps back to fucking her?

Why he attempted to walk away from his daughters is also a mystery. He was so hurt by being cucked that when he sees her again they immediately go at it.

Below someone claims it fits the logical paraemeters/behaviours, etc. Horsepucky!

Like last comment went from a like it to dislike. The ending was so pathetic.

I suspect the author was going for something more subtle than most cheating stories. Other commenters complain about the lack of reason given for her cheating. I think it was in the first volume that was not read. Mr X had been raping her consistently since before college. She had no qualms listing anyones name, but Mr X remains anonymous? The clues are there; her father has been sexually abusing her since who knows what age. That sort of abuse can cause massive psychological issues around sex, and I suspect that is what we are seeing. Read that way the story is sad all around, but well done. Thanks for the variety.

Wow. First gut reaction is how can you end that way. There must be a final part to this story. And then, I realized how beautifully sweet Scouries writes. The clues he left, our imagination and thoughts he wants us to delve. It’s all there. Ahh. But what a sweet corrupt tale it would be.

Very good story to start with. Ive noticed as ive read down through your story list that you have started leaving the storys short and leaving the ending to our imagination i understand that but i feel that the story should have touched on chapter 1 before ending. Guess i just like closure. my big complaint is you brining politics into it. I dont read litoratica to be reminded of our political problems of today

so his wife fucked 88 men. 88!!! one can only imagine how many sloppy seconds he had and how many creampies he ate. not to mention that even his kids aren't his. and after all that he just jumped right into fucking her. WTF? are you sure this guy is not a cuckold?

it was a rare privilege to click on the star with a 5 in the middle.

The rich and entitled, hypocrites with their horrendous secrets, while they try to tell others how to live.

I guess after the Epstein sex island revelations the story, now going of 15 years, seems kind of mild.

Do I think rich entitled people act like this? Yes 5

Five star you are a great WRITER

I imagine they're women like her out there. Entitled and selfish. Great story.

Started well, finished shit!

Getting back with the slut wrecked an otherwise excellent tale. I get it he wants to reconnect with his non biological daughters….but what kind of stupid is it to fuck his ex immediately upon her coming by weeks after the divorce? Especially as he had tapped his lawyer and 2 other babes in the meantime? Pretty much defined him as a male slut. That took a 5 down to a 3.

unqualified HORSHHHIT!

Another great story from a great author...until the Epilogue where the entire thing turned to shit. I don't know what it is about most authors on this site, but for some reason, even when the wife is 100% in the wrong and the man actually appears like he's going to come out on top, the authors turn the man into a weak, spineless pussy. So, the bitch ex-wife who was never really a wife, to begin with because she fucked 88 guys during her "marriage" and fooled this sucked into raising children that aren't even his gets to continue fucking anyone she wants. She can still fuck this cuckold loser whenever she wants AND he's still going to play daddy to two kids that are not his. It sure sounds like her situation didn't change one bit. In fact, the divorce probably made her lifestyle 1000 times easier to maintain. No lame husband to maneuver around. Pathetic.

I stopped reading Loving Wives stories a while back for multiple reasons. I found this author today and everything has been outstanding so I thought I'd give one of his LW tales a chance. BIG MISTAKE. I still look forward to reading the remainder of the stories in the Incest/Taboo category.

yuk! fucking dirtballs

WOW!! that woman uses her pussy like a clown car.

In my opinion you trashed the whole story with the epilogue. I rate it 2 stars because the story, up until the epilogue, was well written.

I'm sorry, but if a woman bears the child of a man besides her husband, then she is best placed under her favorite rose bush in the garden.

Hated the ending except for his chance to see his kids again. I understand the anger and the rage, but not the abandonment of the children that he raised.

Victoria needs lots of help and counseling. It would have been a better ending if she had come to him after trying to address her major issues.

Liked it, sort of.

WTF was that BS ending?

Granted Vicky was a habitual cheater,it was obvious she had been sexually assaulted not once but multiple times.And my money is on Reggie that raped and molested Vicky,as for Charlie her cousin it was obviously a onetime thing and quickly cut it off with eachother.

Now it wasn't specified but the way Paddy told Reggie he better not ever lay a finger on the girls meaning Abigail and Bernedette or he would pay.As for Paddy and Vicky by her giving him her first diary implied he should read it to get a context of what happened to her to cause her to be so sexually crazy.Lastly it wasn't said but for Paddy to just grab Vicky and fuck her in his condo implies feelings for one another,but does that mean Vicky and Paddy will get back together as a couple,I highly doubt it but maybe like a friends-with-benefits arrangement.Oh and the last last thing is even tho Paddy is not the father of his two girls that still doesn't mean he can't be the Best Dad to them,hope he made the right decision.

Non-biological kids are nothing more than friends at best.

I have enjoyed reading alot of the stories written by this author. The only problem I have is that almost all of them feel incomplete.

Good job. Glad dad stayed a dad and got a little on the side!

Literal slut but had a weird OCD to document each encounter and rate it, though who could say why because even when she found a 100, it didn't seem to matter. And of course marriage means nothing to such a damaged woman. I'm not even going to question her state of mind. It is what it is.

Too bad there is not a satisfactiry ending to this story. Not much doubt there is a history of sexual abuse in vol one and the reason for her warped view of extra sex. Being a RAAC fan I would like to have seen some of that. Even if they didn't re marry they could be friends with benefits and he would be a good father for the two girls.

Interesting concept, but it's missing a decent ending including some sort of payback on his FIL.

Yes see the incest daughters, no don't keep hooking up with the sank nympho, hire a bodyguard cuz you can't trust old money boomers to behave, and set up an contingency to out their screwy family if an accident should befall him.

No pussy is that good

Dude has been out with other women and has been with a smart, attractive accomplished lawyer, several times.

Move on, man!

I am left with a profound sense of sadness even though I KNOW it's only fiction. Your writing always leaves a mark.

Thank you for sharing your talent.

MLJ

There were too many holes in the ending. It was a solid 4 leaning toward 5 until the rushed and incomplete ending. 3 stars.

Do you expect anything different from republicans?