- BDSM
- Other World Kingdom
- Page 13
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- What the fuck is he doing here?
- It's over Danny. Too many deaths. Let him eat, let him recover.
- Are yo u out of your mind, what do you think he will do as soon as he gets out from here? He will go to the cops and it will be the end of us, of all of us. Put him back in the basement, let him die.
I disregard him and keep heading to the kitchen.
- Lauren, Danny grabs me by the arm. Take him down, now!
- Get off me Danny! Get off, now!
The screaming gets everyone else inside. They are all in chock that I have let Oliver out.
- What do you think you are doing? That is Ben talking
- I'm letting him go.
- Lauren, no. Don't do this. Danny is right, he will go straight to the cops and they will have us all arrested and thrown in jail. Get out now Lauren. We will handle him.
- You will just kill him. Death, death and more death. Is that all we are worth?
Denis gets close to me and try to softly take me away.
- You. Don't touch me. Where were you, unh! When all the shit was going down, where were you? You stupid fuck, you ran for your own life, you didn't care. Don't try to make it up now, be all nice and licking my pussy thinking I have forgotten what you did. Get lost! And don't ever come back.
That's the end of Denis. I never saw him again after that.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoIt starts about the OWK and morphs into a drug crazed gang story. In which I have no interest in reading waste of time. The queens name was Sylvia not Madeline. IT closed because of its harsh reputation kept men away! Even men were not dumb enough to seek out be beaten to near death.
Deejay121about 6 years agoI can only assume English is not your first language, that said it was hard reading with so many grammatical errors along with incorrect word and phrase choices, I nearly gave up on several occasions, the back story starts out well enough, but then becomes full of repetition towards the last few pages. Reasonable first attempt should you write further, maybe an editor would be advantageous, they could also advise on proof reading and condensing. I usually like to give a glowing comment and five stars but on this occasion it's not the case.
