All Comments on 'OTK Ch. 04'

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YSirtanlyYSirtanlyover 11 years ago
Another great part of this story

As with the other parts I found it enjoyable and interesting. Waiting anxiously for the next part. A great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow and Wow !!!!!

Is this truly the first time you have written? The action is super. Yes, you could develop the personalities and descriptions of the players, but why bother.

Got a chapter 5 in mind???

Thanks Don

C_frommnC_frommnover 11 years ago
Like

The Dominant side of Don cant wait to see who he gets to next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Starting to dislike this. Second chapter was virtually rape this was brutality as his mum was not into the beating. She only allowed it because she is frightened of him.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

more pleasem- my panties were soaking

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