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by oggbashan

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ArdieffArdieffover 3 years ago

Enjoyable and fun ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
seems rushed

with so many typos, and not of your normal quality, one could assume that you rushed it during lunch at the pub.

oggbashanoggbashanover 3 years agoAuthor

Typos? I didn't have a printer until later. I sumbitted a revised version but too late. I will edit iun a few days.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
T.T?

Shades of Time Team?? So glad you didn't have the 'little guy' running around!

19pvc44

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireover 3 years ago

Hey, ogg, what a fun story! The dueling kisses from the competing female suitors and the accomplices were especially cute, and I like that they allowed Hubert to realize who he really wanted. You ended the story very well as a result. Yes, there were some typos, too, but considering your medical issues, I breezed past them.

Well done. 4.6* rounded up to 5.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
How about a companion piece?

The story of Algernon and Rebecca would be a good read.

A_BierceA_Bierceover 3 years ago

Indiana Jones

meets Tom Jones (either one).

oggbashanoggbashanover 3 years agoAuthor

Most (unfortunately not all!) typos edited out.

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