All Comments on 'Oubliette Pt. 01'

Now this has got potential. Can't wait to read more.

What a wonderfully intense story! I can hardly wait for the next chapter -- thank you, colhands_warmheart, and have five stars for this beauty!

Wow! I am thoroughly hooked! Cannot wait for the second part! 5* from me!

Just wow!! Beautiful, intriguing and damn hot!!

I eagerly await the next chapter.

Thank you and 5 stars.

I'm on board for the next part. Very curious as to what has caused Laura's situation and what she has planned for the sub (and not in the fun sense) human Ian.

I'm hooked! Looking forward to more! :)

Wow, you've got my attention. I can't wait to see where you are taking this one. Great job.

5 stars.

I didn't have a chance to go online the last few days, and found this gem on page 4 of the New Submissions. Sigh.

Again, you write a wonderful tale. I begin to doubt that you could put out something not worthy of 5 stars. Look forward to seeing the conclusion up soon.

ARRGH!

Wonderful first chapter! Each character is so well written and unique. Can't wait for your next chapter!

Loved this first part. Got me gripped in the story right from the first paragraph, can't wait for part 2! 5 stars.

Thank you to everyone who has read and commented. The conclusion has been submitted and will hopefully appear in a few days. Hope you like it.

And Bigg_Mike did catch the typo!! :)

CHWH