All Comments on 'Our Asshole Worship Ritual'

Wow! Every guys dream girl.

Very, very hot. There is nothing better then eating another’s asshole and then fucking it

Wow! For a first story that was amazing. Well done, I hope you have many more for us. 👍

Thank you both so much for your kind words! Xoxo

A great start, well done!

OK premise.

Silly dialog.

Two stars.

I really hope you do a second part where the husband ends up eating from his wifes arse...!

Great subject and content. However, there's no conflict - the protagonist isn't overcoming any difficulty to achieve his goal. Also, ellipses are always three dots... and most of them in this story are unnecessary - either a comma or full stop are more appropriate in most cases. That said, you have the potential to create a good story. Maybe think in terms of beginning, middle, and end, where at the end something in the characters' lives is different compared to how they were at the start? Just my opinions for you to take or leave. Best of luck.

Oh, what a cum dream true if that ever happened to me. GAWD I WANT THAT!!!

Nicely told. I love your dirty talk. I'd love to hear and feel that sexperience in person.

Hot story.

Sexy dialogue.

5 Stars i cummed hard.