All Comments on 'Our Family Sex Club Pt. 05'

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distractionarydistractionaryover 11 years ago
Another brilliant chapter

Elleann is one of the most gifted writers on this site with a unique style that can perhaps best be desribed as "comic porn."

Her main character is sweet and sexy and funny, and is one of the most intriguing characters in erotic fiction.

I highly recommend reading all of her material.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Brill

Absolutely fucking wonderful

clive2007clive2007over 11 years ago
Wonderful

I agree with the others about your work. You are a very clever writer. Very nice tone, funny and ironic. I like her attitude. The psychologist isn't bad either. Where is the place to vote on this page? If there were the array of stars you would get 5 from me. By the way, you may already have noticed this but the "H" rating only goes to stories with an average score of 4.5 or better, and that usually requires an uninterrupted series of sex scenes as extended and graphic as you can make them. You settled instead for a nice sex scene set up cleverly by a smart girl with a keen eye and sharp wit. A far superior approach, in my view. Well done. I will read your other work.

elleannelleannover 11 years agoAuthor
thank you

Thank you for these great comments, I really appreciate them. About voting, I stopped it because of the low votes, and also negative emails, I received from certain readers who are turned off by my stories. I try to make my stories real stories with

interesting characters and plot lines always with the purpose of sexual arousal, and some people just want straight porn and don't like what I do. So I write for people who do like it. Thanks again.

Elle

AzureEyedCowboyAzureEyedCowboyover 11 years ago
Its getting HOT in here, turn on the A/C

What an unexpected twist to the incestuous saga very cleaver I must say. I must admit a good writer will make me want more, and I do. Well done you have improve immensely since the quest in role-play, but that was fun too.

lorencinolorencinoover 11 years ago
superlative

This part is written with a masterful hand that is both insightful and incredible hot. I'm impressed!

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