All Comments on 'Our First Term Together'

Such a naughty story from a very naughty girl - 5 stars from me xx

Good story. Ya might be interested in reading my birthday story submission ;),

The writing was boring, until you switched mid-paragraph from past tense to present, then it was unpalatable.

Do better editing, and cultivate an imagination. Eventually you might get the occasional 5-star rating from somebody besides yourself.

While not into lesbian sex stories, I found this one to be well written and full of descriptive scenes. Nice first entry. You should offer more of your writing. I gave it four stars, not five, solely based on its brevity and my lack of interest in the genre.

For your first story, I thought this was really good. Please continue writing. Let’s see what else you can write.

not into gay crap...

You are hotness defined

Extremely well written in many ways.

Great story, instant hardon promised :)

Keep it up

Very hot story. I look forward to reading moer of your work!

Wow, abi, you sure can tell a hot tale! Now I know something about what "taboo" in your profile was about!

Sally

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Loved it. All sorts of kink! Why did you stop writing?