All Comments on 'Our First Time MMF Ch. 01'

Good start, can’t wait for the next chapter.

It would have been better if you had described the characters in more detail so as to make them appear real. More dialogue may have helped too.

It doesn't make any sense for the wife to wear her lace bra and thong in the hot tub. The chemicals and heat would have ruined them. She should have gone naked instead. The guys also should have gone nude.

There was an interesting twist at the end when, since the husband had already cum, it was up to his friend to satisfy the wife.

Too brief , could have made more of the three way sex. But a great effort.

I can join u guys if u want I'm in p.a.